E-mail is great isn't it? It means you don't have to worry about postal deadlines and you can work on your writing until the last moment.
Which means multiple drafts... at least if you're wise.
That's because our first drafts are almost a spontaneous dumping of what is in our heads on to the screen or paper.
Now if you've done your research, it will be steeped in the subject and relevant. But you can always improve it.
Here are 3 ways to add polish to your first thoughts.
- Check out the order - can you be more logical, capture their interest faster or produce that well crafted example to offer the clincher of a proof.
- Check out the wording, cleaning out all the weak words and replace with strong images to glue themselves to the inside of your reader's brain.
- Check out the spacing. White space in abundance and in the right places makes it easier for your reader to navigate your text. And easier navigation means easier understanding and more connection.
Force yourself to read it again or find someone suitable to comment. It will pay dividends for all your writing.